1. Copy and paste your writing into the window.
2. Select "To Be Verbs", and click "Duck"
3. Kill as many "to be" verbs as you can.
4. Next, paste your writing back into the window.
5. Select "Prepositions"
6. Kill! Kill! Kill the evil prepositions.
StyleDuck will be able to help you with a lot more.
But do these two things first and people will pay attention. You'll get better grades, a job, a raise. They'll understand what you mean. They won't fall asleep.
You'll wake up rich, famous, thin, and beautiful (okay, not.)